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David Upton
Amy Marchino
Essay and Literature
20 February 2012
Laptops vs. Desktops
âI do indeed write on the road. My laptop goes with me everywhere.â Nora Roberts. Computers are a big part of the society of the twenty-first century. Human Beings have become so reliant on them that they no longer use a pen and paper to write a report. Seeing that we depend upon them that much choosing the right one is highly important. There are two main types of computers which are laptops and desktops. Even though they have the same basic functions, they are both genuinely distinct machines. I prefer desktops over laptops for their efficiency.
Desktops have more processing power than their laptop counterpart. Since desktops are stationary and arenât intended to be moved, they can house a bigger motherboard allowing for larger components. Another advantage of that extra space is a larger hard driving giving more space on the computer for storing video files, audio files etc. The combination of all this gives them more RAM which is a measurement of a computers processing power.
Laptops are more portable because of the lack of external wired connections from the motherboard to the monitor. The huge advantage of that is that you could take a laptop to a coffee shop which would be nearly impossible with a desktop. Considering that, laptops are wieldier because of the smaller profile. You can store them in a drawer and get them out only we you need to use them. When it comes to laptops and desktops there is always a sacrifice between processing power and portability.
Desktops are more economical than laptops. The reason for that is because laptops components have to be made on a smaller scale which cost more money than manufacturing the same constituents for a desktop. Laptops have to be powered by a battery which also adds to the total input cost. Most desktops do not house wireless adapters which can cost between sixty and one hundred dollars.
There are gigantic separations between laptops and desktops. The choice of computer still comes down to personal preference. How you plan to use it is completely up to you. Laptops are profound machines, but desktops are still finer appliance. âMicrosoft has a monopoly over the desktop operating systemsâ. Stewart Alsop.

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Ok. I'll give you some constructive criticism (so please don't take this the wrong way). It almost seems to me that you are showing two sides in your essay. In other words, you seem to be supporting desktop computers and laptops. But by the way it sounds in the beginning, you are probably supporting desktops. I was always told to only choose one side and stick with it...otherwise your essay with seem a bit contradictory. Overall, you have written a great essay and i otherwise can't complain.
Oh, and one more thing. You didn't exactly quote right... Here's an example of a quote: Stewart Alsop, an expert in computers (or something like that...), once said, "Microsoft has a monopoly over the desktop operating systems". Continue to do that (and change it up a little bit) with the rest of your quotes and you should be fine.
Hope i helped!!! :)

Is Cyberpowerpc really bad?

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Hey guys, I am going to buy my first *personal* high graded gaming computer and I chose Cyberpower as my manufacturer. I chose the Gamer Xtreme 3D 2000 and I upgraded it a lot, to the point of where the price stands as $6500 and I am okay with that but I wonder, will they be ripping me off or something? I'll tell you the specs I chose for my computer below, so can anyone help me on this?

Specifications-
*BASE_PRICE: [+1666]
BLUETOOTH: USB Bluetooth EDR Dongle Thumb Size [+14]
CAS: Raidmax Agusta Mid-Tower Gaming Case w/ 1x USB 3.0 Port, Fan & LED Light Control (White/Black)
CASUPGRADE: 12in Liquid Neon Thunder Pattern Light [+15] (Blue Color)
CD: Pioneer BDR-207BKS 12X Blu-Ray Writer (Black Color) [+28]
CD2: None
COOLANT: Standard Coolant
CPU: Intel® Core⢠i7-4770K 3.50 GHz 8MB Intel Smart Cache LGA1150 (All Venom OC Certified)
CS_FAN: Maximum Enermax 120MM Case Cooling Fans for selected case (Maximum Silent Operation) [+29] (500-1,200 RPM T.B. Silence Black Color with Red LED Twister Bearing 8-14 dBA [+0])
ENGRAVING: None
FA_HDD: Vigor iSURF II Hard Disk Drive Cooling System [+21] (3 x Systems [+42])
FAN: Corsair Hydro Series H60 High Performance Liquid Cooling System 120MM Radiator & Fan [+16] (Dual Enermax Enlobal Silent High Performance 120MM Fans (Push-Pull) [+29])
FLASHMEDIA: None
FREEBIE_MB: None
FREEBIE_VC: None
FREEBIE_VC2: None
GLASSES: None
HDD: 2TB (2TBx1) SATA-III 6.0Gb/s 64MB Cache 7200RPM HDD [+31] (2TB x 2 (2TB Capacity) Raid 1 High Performance with Data Security [+102])
HDD2: 4TB (4TBx1) SATA-III 6.0Gb/s 64MB Cache 5900RPM HDD [+219] (Single Drive)
IEEE_CARD: IEEE 1394 CARD AND DRIVER [+19]
IUSB: Built-in USB 2.0 Ports
MB_SRT: 64GB SanDisk SATA III 6.0Gb/s SSD - 490 MB/s Read & 240 MB/s Write [+76] (Single Drive)
MEMORY: 32GB (8GBx4) DDR3/2133MHz Dual Channel Memory [+394] (Corsair Vengeance [+58])
MONITOR: * 24" Widescreen 1920x1080 ASUS VS247H-P 1080P (23.6" Viewable) 2ms LED Backlight, DVI, HDMI Input [-67]
MONITOR2: None
MONITOR3: None
MOTHERBOARD: * [4-Way CrossFireX/SLI] GIGABYTE G1.Sniper 5 Intel Z87 Chipset DDR3 ATX Mainboard w/ Ultra Durable 5 Plus, OP AMP, 7.1 Creative Sound Core 3D Audio, Dual GbLAN (Intel & Killer E2200), 4x Gen3 PCIe x16 & 3 PCIe x1 (All Venom OC Certified) [+338]
NETWORK: Intel Pro Gigabit 10/100/1000 Network Card [+34]
NOISEREDUCE1: Sound Absorbing Foam on Side, Top And Bottom panels [+29]
OS: Microsoft® Windows 7 Ultimate [+105] (64-bit Edition)
OVERCLOCK: Extreme OC (Extreme Overclock 20% or more) [+49]
POWERSUPPLY: 1,200 Watts - Corsair AXi AX1200i 1200W Digital 80 PLUS PLATINUM Certified Full Modular Active PFC Power Supply [+307]
RUSH: RUSH!!! READY TO SHIP IN NEXT BUSINESS DAY [+109]
SERVICE: STANDARD WARRANTY: 3-YEAR LIMITED WARRANTY PLUS LIFE-TIME TECHNICAL SUPPORT
SOUND: Creative Sound Blaster ZXR 5.1 Channels 24-bit 96KHz PCIe Sound Card w/SNR 124dB, DBPro optical output, Multi-channel surround, SBX Pro Studio, Sound Core3D Processor & Audio Control Module [+226]
SPEAKERS: Logitech S120 2.0 Stereo Speaker Set [+19] (Black Color)
TABLET: None
TEMP: None
TUNING: None
TVRC: None
UPS1: * OPTI-UPS GNL-1500P 1500VA/900W 6 Outlet Uninterruptible Power Supply [+209]
USB: Connectland USB 2.0 HUB High Speed HUB [+19]
USBFLASH: USB 3.0 Portable Flash Drive [+20] (64GB [+70])
USBHD: None
USBX: NZXT Internal USB 6-PORT Expansion Module + USB Bluetooth Module [+29]
VIDEO: AMD Radeon HD 7990 6GB 16X PCIe 3.0 Dual GPU Video Card [+920] (Major Brand Powered by AMD)
VIDEO2: AMD Radeon HD 7990 6GB 16X PCIe 3.0 Dual GPU Video Card [+1235] (Major Brand Powered by AMD)
VIDEO3: None
VIDEOCAMERA1: Creative Live! Cam Chat HD 720p w/ Noise-Canceling Microphone [+32]
WAP1: Linksys WRT120 4-Port Wireless-N Router [+49]
WNC: 802.11b/g/n 300 Mbps Wireless Card + External 2.4G 5 Dbi Omni-Directional Wireless Antenna [+39]
_PRICE: (+6530)
Thanks for the answer Shane, but I'm not really that good on computer configurations and I'm kinda wealthy, well my dad is and I want a computer, which acts like an ultimate or super computer, that will last me a decade or kinda like 5 years, so will this config do that? Plus I wanted to know about Cyberpower, are they good or bad?

Answer
Did you just say wealthy?
Then this build is more suitable for you.
Processor:2 of the Intel Xeon E5-2695v2(2000$ each)
Motherboard: Asus Z9PED16(500$ dual Processor mobo)
512GB of ECC Buffered RAM(16 sticks)(around 400$-800$)
4-Sli GTX Titan(4000$)
RAID 5 4 1TB Samsung 840 EVO for storage(1600$ total)
RAID 10 4 512GB Samsung 840 Pro for OS(1200$ total)
Windows Server 2012 Datacenter R2/Windows 8 Pro x64(3200+$)
PCIe SSD 1.2TB for ultra fast storage for virtualization(5000+$)
Grand total:18900$-19300$
Good for your needs.

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